Piracy

Between this stolen ship and home
a promise made (a broken vow)
was written in the rolling foam.
Between this stolen ship and home
a breach too wide to cross has grown.
I toss a ring across the bow
between this stolen ship and home:
a promise, made a broken vow.


4 responses to “Piracy

  1. Beautiful. Love the last three lines.

  2. I like what you did there with the second and eighth lines.

  3. I love what “stolen” adds to this piece and how the iambic tetrameter feels like rocking waves.

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