If I dared

What would happen if I broke your resolve? Unbuttoned your lips and the collar of your coat? What would you do if I set kisses there, in the hollow of your throat? Would you burn as hot as I, imagining these things?


13 responses to “If I dared

  1. This has a very deliberate pace.

  2. This is HOT! Well done, you daredevil, you! 🙂

  3. Good question. Makes me wonder!! Love where this one went!

  4. KymmInBarcelona

    Nice! I love the collar/hollow near rhyme.

  5. Whoa! That was hot. I could hear this read aloud by someone with a whiskey voice.

  6. poetry porn! yowsa! nice job.

  7. I feel like this is the first thing “I” said as soon as “you” walked in the door. And I love how you upped the stakes with the dare.

  8. A great take on the prompt.

  9. Sensuous without being overdone. Lovely. As always, Christine!

  10. Quite evocative. It’s enough to get the imagination going!

  11. Oooh, I think you made my heart beat faster! What everyone else said, plus I love the unbuttoning of lips and collar together.

  12. HOT! The imagination is a powerful thing.

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