Every Tuesday at 7:00, like clockwork, I pass her on the street. Most days she watches me, eyes shaded by a tattered scarf, fingers twitching restlessly. She never smiles. It wouldn’t bother me, if I always took the same route to work.

I was floored to see that my post won the crowd favorite badge this week!

18 responses to “Tuesdays

  1. Oh, wow.
    the idea of “she’s everywhere”, was never so vivid, haunting.

  2. Very mysterious! I loved the twist at the end.

  3. There is definitely a touch off scary to this, for me! Yes, haunting is the perfect word!

  4. Awesome last sentence – that brought the creep factor into it for me 🙂

  5. Oh, went from nice to niiiiiiice in one twist.

  6. Just the right amount of creepiness. I’m left wondering why she’s following your protagonist. Unsettling!

  7. Cool twist at the end!

  8. I love this. A really relatable experience suddenly turns into something quite sinister. Beautifully done!

  9. That was fantastic mate!

  10. Oh brilliant, what a twist.

  11. OMG. yes, that’s troublesome.

  12. Eeks!So delightfully creepy!Loved it Christine 🙂

  13. Oh the haunting! Spooky tale and the fog 😀

    Shailaja’s post

  14. YIKES! I’d start taking the car to work. lol

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