Breath

Sometimes the world takes a breath. In those quiet moments, those rare interstices, I find a separate peace in the ebb and flow and pattern of the words, in their collisions and collusions.


This post was written in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge  weekend Trifextra prompt:

For this weekend’s challenge, in honor of all of the writers throwing rationality (and perhaps sanity) to the wind and writing til their fingers bleed [during National Novel Writing Month], we’re asking for exactly 33 words about why we write.

21 responses to “Breath

  1. Love the idea, love the words you chose to express it!

  2. Beautifully written. The comment exchange above was an added bonus. Blogging while working from home? I haven’t heard of such a thing 😉

  3. Wow! So beautifully written!

  4. I love the ending – well the whole thing but especially your choice of words to express the last three.

  5. i like the idea of a kind of meditation. getting into a different state of being using writing

  6. Oh I like this! Written words are silent, but loud in silence! (:

  7. Fabulous! Perfectly said 🙂

  8. deep, profound and yet, soo light. you’ve made me say wow yet again!

  9. How poetic! I love the idea here.

  10. Beautify written and true descriptive words.

  11. collisions and collusions – lovely

  12. I love your words and the sentiment expressed so beautifully.

  13. There is a comfort in the ritual of words. Beautifully written.

  14. LOVE. And I love the possible double meaning of the word “peace” with a slight spelling change to “piece.” Excellent.

  15. Love the collisions and collusions. I’m definately more on the collisions side 🙂

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